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PostSubject: story 2 part 2   Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:41 am

STORY 2 PART 2





hi all sry for not write on a long time
but it have been a lot of thigs happend.
after read plzz comment.

last happend was that the eddy trict the acharon.
and saild around it.
this story is back in the time of the¨new world¨
in the brasilian cost.


stockie:
we made it now we must get to an cost and repair.
yes we need new suplies and info.

the ship and its crew got to a shore on the island of tarena.
every thing was green and a lot of new anilmals.
after a day the ship was ready to go.
no lets stay longer this is so nice.
but capn then the phantom will get to the brasilian sea first.
we have no chose we cant take it down its to good for us.

the doktor on the ship took his assistant and go to find some new
animals. the walkt long over the big island.
but when they got to the highest point on the island they saw some they
thought they wont see a ship and it have red,wite and blue.
the eng flag.
tom(assistant) we must get to the shore and warn the eddy.
they run all they managed.

EDDY EDDY
capn eddy. the acharon is here.
what are you saying.
its here sir.
ALL MEN MAKE READY FOR WAR.
SIR how can we take it we will die.
no we wont.
if the take up and wale catch flag they wont think its us.

and so they did all was ready when the eng got over them


france wale catchers surender now or you will all die.
the acharon got all over them
they was cannon to cannon but then.


FIRE MAN FIRE.
YES EDDY.

THE CONNONS made hole in the air the sound was high.
bord them men bord.

but when they got on the eng ship all men was dead.
eddy what is this we killd em all.
be carefull it may be a trap.
but then all the eng men rised up and all start fight.
but at eddys ship some men was left and gave them shoting cover.
we must take out theyr cannon men.
so the france cannons shoted and made a hole in theyr ship.
now bord med rest bord.

GO GO GO.

the battle was long and blody.
but eddy won.

all the men was at the deck.
mr.hollum i want you to take the acharon.
me sir??
yes hollum. you will be and great leader.
ty sir.
here is your orders from the king ant.
again ty so much sir.
you will end my mission. we will stay here so we can have a rest.

and then the acharon saild to the brasilian sea.
and all was happy eksept ANT(king of eng) that have lost his bet with parasite bonaparte.
agh damn u rise. i will never bet on you again!!!!


ty for read my story plzz comment...
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PostSubject: Re: story 2 part 2   Sun Sep 06, 2009 1:24 pm

Nice story rise!

i liked this part the most:

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but when they got on the eng ship all men was dead.
eddy what is this we killd em all.
be carefull it may be a trap.
but then all the eng men rised up and all start fight.

Too bad not everyone came in it this time, but it's something different so it was
fun to read!

Good job and keep up the good work!

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PostSubject: Re: story 2 part 2   Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:09 pm

Why do i always have to lose? -_-

good story man keep it up, this is my monthly entertainmant :p,, however i wanna ask you kindly to write with some ! , . : ... ' " ect....,,, hope you get that :p


greetz and continue like that!

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